Do you like my poem I wrote?

Hi. This is a very reflective poem and lot's of feelings and emotions, it's heartfelt and touching, the picture words you painted is a real life experience and the topic and the form made your poem come alive, it's good that you talk about it , and that you put it in a poem for others to learn from what had happened to you. This is a brilliant and a good written piece. Thanks for sharing and I wish you a happy life. Keep on writing and sharing. God bless!